Opening Letters
We are a large
manufacturing company specializing in……
We are one of the leading
producers of ………
You probably associate
with our name with the manufacture of chemical/textiles/business/heavy
engineering ……..
Some more beginnings of job
application
I saw your recent
advertisement in the ……
I came to learn from a
reliable source that the position of ……..
….. is lying vacant/will
be lying vacant from January 21 …….
I am writing to enquire
whether you have a suitable vacancy in your organization which I might usefully
fill.
Closes of job
applications
I look forward to hearing
from you and to being granted the opportunity for an interview.
I trust you will consider
my application favorably and grant me an interview.
I look forward to the
opportunity of attending an interview, at which I can provide further details.
Checklist of a Letter
Before singing a letter,
go through with following questions
Will it be understood?
Does it sound natural and
sincere?
Is the tone right in approaching?
Are all the details
accurate?
Is all the essential
information included?
Is it clear, concise and
courteous?
Is all the spelling
correct?
Is it properly punctuated
and grammatically correct?
Is it organized logically?
Is its appearance attractive,
well displayed and consistent?
If you found YES to all
questions, then you can sign and send to someone confidently.
Wordy phrase Alternative
In about a week’s time in about a
week
Blue in color blue
Speaking on a theoretical
basis speaking
theoretically
Consensus of opinion consensus
In the vast majority of
cases in
most cases
In spite of the fact that although
Personal in manner personal
Refer back to refer
to
Engaged in a study of studying
Depreciates in value depreciates
Opening gambit gambit
Few in number few
Until such time as until
Due to the fact that because
Very necessary necessary
In the amount of BDT 4000.00 for BDT 4000.00
Between the hours of 3 – 9 pm between 3 – 9 pm
Empty vacuum vacuum
Some useful expressions
in writing letters
Polite refusals to
requests and excuses
We are (fully) aware of
the problem, but unfortunately………..
We (fully) appreciate your
difficulties/point of view but……
I am afraid/Regretfully we
are not in a position to/not able to…….
We feel that (at this
stage) it would be better/be unwise/not be in our interest to.
We realize this is not
ideal, however…….
Sample Cover Letter / Job Application
Format - 1
February 21, 2013
The Human resource Manager
Manchester Group of company
DOHS
Mohakhali
Dhaka 1212
Dear Sir
I saw your recent advert in the Daily Prothom-alo for the
position of Management Trainee and I
feel it is the right kind of position for which I have been waiting for some
time.
A detailed resume and a recent photograph are enclosed for
your considerate evaluation.
I hope I may be granted an interview when I can explain my
qualifications more fully.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Thank you very much indeed.
Sincerely yours
Swapan Chandra Chakraborty
Format - 2
Swapan Chandra
Chakraborty
House 06, Main
Road, Banasree, Rampura, Dhaka-1219
Cell: 01710226223,
e-mail: ranna07@yahoo.com
February 22, 2013
Human Resource Manager
SEL Real State Ltd.
44 Panthapath, Dhaka
Application for the position of “Sales Executive”
Dear Sir
In response to your job advertisement published in the Daily
Star on 11th February- 2013, I would like to apply for the position of Sales
Executive.
I
understand from your advertisement that your organization needs young and
dynamic people for working in the sales promotion team for your newly launched
project. You will note from my enclosed CV that I my education background as
well as the part time job assignments during last couple of years through which
I have had exposure and hands on experience in market research and promotional
techniques make me an ideal candidate for the position.
I
have got my Masters degree in Commerce (Marketing) from Jahangirnagar
University in 2000. Currently I am
working as a part time research executive for a reputed market research firm.
I
believe working in a reputed organization like your one will provide me
excellent opportunity for my career growth in the area of direct marketing and
sales promotion. I am confident that if provided the opportunity to serve your
organization, I will prove myself to be an important asset for your company
through my dedication, sincerity and highest level of professionalism.
I
would request for an interview at your convenience. For any query, you can
reach me at my mobile 01710226223. You can also e-mail me at ranna07@yahoo.com.
Thank you.
Yours truly
Swapan Chandra Chakraborty
Encl: 1. Curriculum Vita
2. Photograph
3. Experience
Certificate
Format - 3
February 22, 2013
Mr. Eguchi Kozi
Senior Human Resources Manager
Shimizu Corporation,
20 Kawran Bazar, Dhaka
Bangladesh
Subject : Job application for the post of Sales Manager.
Dear Sir
Referenced to you job advertisement at jobs1.com I strongly
believe my experience and education will make me the ideal candidate for the
post. You stated in your ad that you were looking for an ambitious leader who
will develop and manage accounts. Here is a snapshot of what I have done in the
past and what I can bring to Shimizu Corporation:
- Identified target markets, developed product requirements, and effectively evaluated customer needs for a 30% increase in customer satisfaction.
- Developed strategic plans based on industry tending and customer analysis.
- Prepared sales forecasts, account status reports, and recommendations which enhanced account growth and revenue by 40%.
- Participated in contract negotiations with top executives.
- Built and led a motivated and skilled sales team of 20.
I'm confident in what I do and always go above and beyond to
satisfy my clients while keeping company goals in mind. I have proven
throughout my career that I can create new business, develop existing accounts
and cultivate client loyalty. Let me do the same for your company.
I have no doubt that a few minutes of your time with me will
convince you that I can be a great asset to Shimizu Corporation. Together, we
can achieve results!
Sincerely
Sumon Nandi Majumder
Enclosure
Format - 4
February 15, 2013
Mr. Eguchi Kozi
Human Resources Manager
Shimizu Corporation
22, Kawran Bazar, Dhaka
Bangladesh
Subject: CEO of Marketing position
Dear Sir
While reading an article in Sales & Marketing Digest on
leading marketing firms, I took an interest in the type of product focus your
company is advancing towards. As shown below, my past accomplishments are an
ideal match to your requirements for a CEO of Marketing.
Your Requirements:
- Charismatic professional with top-level management experience.
- Proven record.
- Sales management experience.
- Product development experience.
- Communication and presentation skills.
- Master's degree.
My Qualifications:
- Former manager of a $125MM division of a Fortune 500 company. Served on the Board of Executives of two subsidiaries.
- Grew sales from $50 to $125MM in three years by internal growth and acquisition.
- Former Marketing Manager for a Fortune 500 company. Led sales team of 15.
- Delivered product-specific training and helped ensure consistent product messaging.
- Created technical marketing presentations and assisted in developing product demonstrations.
- MBA from the University of California, Los Angeles.
These are only a few of my accomplishments. I look forward
to speaking with you in more detail about my record, and I will follow up by
phone the week of February 27.
Sincerely
Signature here
Upoma Kor
Enclosure
Having a Cover letter will definitely pay off, yet surprisingly many people are still tempted to just send their CV instantly and reduce their chances significantly.
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